question 6th dec 2011

 

• I spoke before people 
• i will improve my ideas for next time
• i enjoy Roo's speech the most because he has great idea 
• I had fun and more experiment for next time 
• I dislike nothing

3 questions!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

1. I saw a vulture eating a ............. yesterday.
1.corpse
2.apple
3.pencil

2.My brother is .......................... because I broke his toys.
1. groan
2.happy
3.pencil

3.I try to ................................... my brother that I was right.
1.convice
2.happy
3.destroy

Assignment 4:writting reflection

One thing that I did well was that I have wrote detail in my story, for example "It was a rainy storm morning" descripe the weather well.

Two things that I can improve in the future is I'll make my story more entertaining and fewer mistakes. I'll give in the story some funny sentences and check mistakes in the dictionary.

Assignment 3

Nextime, I'll write my personality just in one monemt, in chronological order, more entertaining and have some sensory image.

Asignment 2

Look at your test drive(personal narrative writing from last week).  Tell me what you think you did well.  How can you improve the next time you write a personal narrative?  Was you personal narrative interesting?  Why or why not?  What grammar errors did you make and how will you correct them in the future?

This time, my writing skill has been improve a lot. Next time, i have to write more detail ideas. I think my personal narrative is more interesting than last time because i wrote more detail. but i made some grammar mistakes are about tense and vocabulary. I will try to write better next time