Assignment 3

Nextime, I'll write my personality just in one monemt, in chronological order, more entertaining and have some sensory image.

Asignment 2

Look at your test drive(personal narrative writing from last week).  Tell me what you think you did well.  How can you improve the next time you write a personal narrative?  Was you personal narrative interesting?  Why or why not?  What grammar errors did you make and how will you correct them in the future?

This time, my writing skill has been improve a lot. Next time, i have to write more detail ideas. I think my personal narrative is more interesting than last time because i wrote more detail. but i made some grammar mistakes are about tense and vocabulary. I will try to write better next time