One thing that I did well was that I have wrote detail in my story, for example "It was a rainy storm morning" descripe the weather well.
Two things that I can improve in the future is I'll make my story more entertaining and fewer mistakes. I'll give in the story some funny sentences and check mistakes in the dictionary.
Two things that I can improve in the future is I'll make my story more entertaining and fewer mistakes. I'll give in the story some funny sentences and check mistakes in the dictionary.
